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Asked almost 11 years ago by userpic jerseygirl18zzz
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4566 15 profile 90757
What the?!
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4695 2 profile 145172
@Glitter_Girl what
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4583 3 profile 110360
@jerseygirl18zzz I dont get it
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5260 1 454468506 profile 163668 0
i don't get it
almost 11 years ago
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4501 15 profile 135859
guy
no offence but don't even try
almost 11 years ago
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4566 15 profile 90757
I don't get this so I said what the?!
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4695 2 profile 145172
@Mikayla I am writing a story
almost 11 years ago
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4695 2 profile 145172
@guy why
almost 11 years ago
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4695 2 profile 145172
@Glitter_Girl ok
almost 11 years ago
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4543 18 profile 212699
This doesn't tell anything about the story, it can go anywhere. You might want to add some more detail and establish a plot too.
almost 11 years ago
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4549 11 profile 167550
really good just make what happened in the beginning in the story
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4695 2 profile 145172
@bloodluv17thanls
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4695 2 profile 145172
@makayla it's gonna be about a girl who goes to a motel and there are demons ghousrts etc called motel 6
almost 11 years ago
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4695 2 profile 145172
@bloodluv17 Thanks
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4566 15 profile 90757
@jerseygirl18zzz I get it now
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4695 2 profile 145172
@Glitter_Girl thanks
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4507 7 profile 222001
That was pretty good
almost 11 years ago
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4695 2 profile 145172
@angel thanks
almost 11 years ago
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4695 2 profile 145172
@bloodluv17 thanks so much
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4695 2 profile 145172
@bloodluv17 guess how old I am
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4802 5 profile 627535
that is good
about 10 years ago
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4816 1 416107801 profile 82723 0
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almost 10 years ago
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5365 4 463551322 profile 475674 0
Ehhhh the writing style could use some work tbh
almost 10 years ago
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has potential, but it's too generic, and it needs some work
over 9 years ago
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5141 23 444267969 profile 83625 0
@๐Ÿ‘ŠDuchessjohanna๐Ÿ‘Š I agree
over 9 years ago
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5113 17 441824597 profile 1050176 0
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Seems like this is more about the story here than any fancy prose. Keep fleshing it out, and take out extraneous words.
about 9 years ago
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