@jerseygirl18zzz
I dont get it
about 11 years ago
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no offence but don't even try
about 11 years ago
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I don't get this so I said what the?!
about 11 years ago
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@Mikayla I am writing a story
about 11 years ago
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This doesn't tell anything about the story, it can go anywhere. You might want to add some more detail and establish a plot too.
about 11 years ago
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really good just make what happened in the beginning in the story
about 11 years ago
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@makayla it's gonna be about a girl who goes to a motel and there are demons ghousrts etc called motel 6
about 11 years ago
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@jerseygirl18zzz I get it now
about 11 years ago
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@bloodluv17 thanks so much
about 11 years ago
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@bloodluv17 guess how old I am
about 11 years ago
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about 10 years ago
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Ehhhh the writing style could use some work tbh
about 10 years ago
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has potential, but it's too generic, and it needs some work
over 9 years ago
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@๐Duchessjohanna๐ I agree
over 9 years ago
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Seems like this is more about the story here than any fancy prose. Keep fleshing it out, and take out extraneous words.
about 9 years ago
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