Good?

No
51 votes

How old r u
65 votes

Yes
95 votes

Comments

Glitter_GirlWhat the?!

jerseygirl18zzz@Glitter_Girl what

name@jerseygirl18zzz I dont get it

Shinedown01i don't get it

guyno offence but don't even try

Glitter_GirlI don't get this so I said what the?!

jerseygirl18zzz@Mikayla I am writing a story

jerseygirl18zzz@guy why

jerseygirl18zzz@Glitter_Girl ok

AmonnaThis doesn't tell anything about the story, it can go anywhere. You might want to add some more detail and establish a plot too.

makaylareally good just make what happened in the beginning in the story

jerseygirl18zzz@bloodluv17thanls

jerseygirl18zzz@makayla it's gonna be about a girl who goes to a motel and there are demons ghousrts etc called motel 6

jerseygirl18zzz@bloodluv17 Thanks

Glitter_Girl@jerseygirl18zzz I get it now

jerseygirl18zzz@Glitter_Girl thanks

angel That was pretty good

jerseygirl18zzz@angel thanks

jerseygirl18zzz@bloodluv17 thanks so much

jerseygirl18zzz@bloodluv17 guess how old I am

Rosie that is good

Jasmine👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

👊Duchessjohanna👊Ehhhh the writing style could use some work tbh

ayanahas potential, but it's too generic, and it needs some work

👑Princess_Pewdiepie👑@👊Duchessjohanna👊 I agree

ASeems like this is more about the story here than any fancy prose. Keep fleshing it out, and take out extraneous words.