Is this good so far?

Bad
51 votes

I need the hospital that makes me sick
24 votes

How old are you
131 votes

Good
204 votes

Comments

Qwertypop35Yj how old r u???

samiyah12111

samiyah121was is good

samiyah121@Qwertypop35 was it good

holly U need more adjectives then it would be amazing

Madeline I think for your age, it's excellent. I'd punctuate it slightly differently, to create more tension, and maybe do something that's really original!

Paula SmithSoooooo clever

Lilly it's really gd!! Any more?

AbbeyI definately agree with Madeline. Great job!

Sarka123i find it amazing and I'm a rubbish story writer.

IHATECHEESE😝@samiyah121 wow me too!!

Meatball453i wanted to read more!! Good job!!!!!

IHATECHEESE😝@samiyah121 wow me too!!

Meatball453i wanted to read more!! Good job!!!!!

Kataang4evr@Meatball453 Ikr! Keep goin!

Madi meIs that on kik?

Finlay_xxthat is really good!!

hazMore more more :)

marell Andrew pretty good

Breezy1314for your age, its pretty good. Just imagine what you'll be able to write in 10 years from now! Don't give up on your writing dream!

MeeeeeeeeGood but look closer for run on sentences

jerseygirl18zzzgreat when it's a book tell me

I love reading I'm writting a horror story, were they all die at the end! I wanna be a aouther

I love reading I'm 11 as well

Erin💕pretty good especially the first bit u need to describe a bit more

alicexxxgrammar x

CatnipitiAmazing but you need more description

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