Is my makeup yay or nay

hard to tell with this lighting, honestly. I think maybe you might look better with a more red lip, and more blush. I'd add a dark brown liner as well and mascara. also, this base color kind of seems like it's washing you out a bit

you have lovely features to work with, though, and this is a great start. also, I see that you might already have eye makeup on, it's just really hard to tell with this lighting