Is this good so far?

Yj how old r u???

11

was is good

@Qwertypop35 was it good

U need more adjectives then it would be amazing

I think for your age, it's excellent. I'd punctuate it slightly differently, to create more tension, and maybe do something that's really original!

Soooooo clever

it's really gd!! Any more?

I definately agree with Madeline. Great job!

i find it amazing and I'm a rubbish story writer.

@samiyah121 wow me too!!

i wanted to read more!! Good job!!!!!

@samiyah121 wow me too!!

i wanted to read more!! Good job!!!!!

@Meatball453 Ikr! Keep goin!

Is that on kik?

that is really good!!

More more more :)

pretty good

for your age, its pretty good. Just imagine what you'll be able to write in 10 years from now! Don't give up on your writing dream!

Good but look closer for run on sentences

great when it's a book tell me

I'm writting a horror story, were they all die at the end! I wanna be a aouther

I'm 11 as well

pretty good especially the first bit u need to describe a bit more

grammar x

Amazing but you need more description

Mathematics is the abstract study of topics such as quantity(numbers),structure,space,and change.There is a range of views among mathematicians and philosophers as to the exact scope and definition of mathematics.Mathematicians seek out patterns and use them to formulate new conjectures. Mathematicians resolve the truth or falsity of conjectures by mathematical proof. When mathematical structures are good models of real phenomena, then mathematical reasoning can provide insight or predictions about nature. Through the use of abstraction and logic, mathematics developed from counting, calculation, measurement, and the systematic study of the shapes and motions of physical objects. Practical mathematics has been a human activity for as far back as written records exist. The research required to solve mathematical problems can take years or even centuries of sustained inquiry.