One day Charlie was in his limo going to a party when he saw bonnie on the street curled up in her blanket and quickly told the driver to stop the car. He jumped out of the car and walked to the lady. But his driver tried to stop him as soon as he saw what he was doing. " what are you doing master? She might have germs. She may give you a disease. Come back Into the car." But Charlie ignores him. He approached bonnie and knelt down. "Hello. I'm Charlie" he smiled at her " can I get something for you would you like me to bye you something?" Bonnie looked up with her sparkling eyes gazing into his. 'Wow' Charlie thought. 'She has beautiful eyes' 'why would someone so pretty be on the street' she suddenly started coughing again but this time blood came out. "Oh my gosh! Please let me help you!" Bonnie shook her head " I'm fine" coughing more blood. "Ownest" but Charlie wasn't taking any of it. He picked her up and took her to the limo. "We need to get her to a hospital right now!" Charlie demanded to the driver. " hey get her out of the car! She will spread germs. She is not our problem! And you will miss the party!" The driver cried. "I don't care! She is a beautiful young girl and doesn't deserve this!" He fought back " now either ur driving me there or I'm walking" . The driver sighed" the things I do for you".
by the time they were at the hospital bonnie had covered Charlie in blood. " please get this girl to a room immediately! She is very sick and needs treating." He shouted at the first doctor he could find.
They took her into a private room which Charlie couldn't go in. " come on let's go" said the driver. " you go, I'm staying to make sure she's alright" he said. Then a doctor came bursting out. " she has a fever and the best thing to do is keep her I'm a warm house. Have you contacted her family yet?" He asked. " she... She was on the street when we found her." " ah" the doctor said " well I'm not sure where she can go....." " she can come with me" Charlie butted in. " she can stay with us" " I'm not sure that that's a good idea" the driver said. "Well it's better than being on the streets. Thank you so much sir." Said the doctor " we'll give her a wash and clean clothes and then you can take her home." " also before she gets ready why don't you meet her and tell her what's happening?"
Charlie walked into the room where the women who bled horrendously on him lay. " hi" he said awkwardly. " I'm Charlie" he sat down next to the bed and studied her. " I'm bonnie" she mumbled almost too quietly for him to hear. " that's a pretty name" he smiled. " urrm... So... Bonnie. Since you don't have anywhere to stay at the moment... Urrm... Well.... Your coming to stay with me." " I don't understand" she said " your eyes.. They're so... Tender looking but your body looks big and strong, it doesn't make sense. Either your eyes are with the wrong body or your body is with the wrong eyes." But Charlie had also noticed something about her eyes. They sparkled. But not an ordinary sparkle. A sparkle of warmth. Even though most of her looked quite awful, she still had her beautiful eyes to look at instead.
When they arrived at the house Charlie's farther was NOT in a good mood. Charlie thought 'well this is just great, I know farther a not going to be happy with a stranger here especially if he's in a BAD mood.' " hello farther" he said still keeping bonnie tucked up around him. " who is that women on your arms? " he demanded " shush, she's asleep! Her name is bonnie. And I found her...." "Oh you found her at the party did you?" He interrupted. " no farther, I didn't go to the party." Charlie said. "What? What do you mean? Who is this women?" Farther questioned. " she was on the streets and coughing...." "WHAT!? She's a tramp and was coughing and you HELPED her!?!?" " look I don't care what you think farther. The doctor says that she has a fever and needs to be in a warm house of a little while. And since she doesn't have a warm house, let alone a house, I offered for here to come with us!" Charlie argued back. The farther looks at the driver. And the driver says "I tried to stop him but he wouldn't listen." "Look, she's here now so that's that. I'm taking here to the bedroom." Charlie says already walking out of the room.
The farther sighs.
So Charlie took her home and said u can stay in this guest room 4 a while and he said to Bonnie I am going to get u some clean clothes for u and now get some sleep. So he came back with some beautiful clothes for her to wear, so he went up and woke Bonnie up and showed her the new clothes he had for her and she said she loved them. So she put the new clothes on and showed him and he said u look beautiful.
When bonnie woke up she panicked, unsure of where she was and why she wasn't wearing her grey dress. She was wearing a clean white dress and her body was also surprisingly clean. But suddenly she heard a knock on the door. Inside she was screaming of panic but on the outside she stayed calm and said " who is it?" Charlie poked his head in. "Hi bonnie" he said stepping in " how was your sleep?" " I'm not sure." She replied trying to figure out why he was taking her in, why he was letting her sleep here, why he even looked at her instead of spitting at her like everyone else does. " ok, well would you like your breackfast now or aren't you hungry?" He spoke again. " urrm yes please" she replied. " just to check, are you allergic to anything?" " I don't know.... I haven't had much food in my life" she looked down. "We'll I know you will love this food," he comes in with a whole load of stuff. " omy my gosh!" Bonnie whispered. "Can I?"she asked.
when she was done Charlie just looked into her eyes and felt like he was in love. And then bonnie did that thing again where her eyes twinkle. Charlie leant in to kiss but bonnie hesitated. And slowly she let him kiss her.and they just fell in love
that sounds good. Maybe I could do it later tho if that's ok. I'm really tired cos I went canoeing earlier wich is tiering for the arms and I just spent an hour coming up with a story. But I will think about what to write and I will write at the top @alice so that you can find it in activities and I will do it in this comment one and I will tell u when I start writing ! I pinkie promise! 😝
@Call Me Emma😘 I'm so sorry my mums called for dinner and I have to go aaaaggggh ! I will have to do it later or tomorrow . I'm so sorry to disappoint you. 😔 Will tell you and Alice when I do tho! And it will be here
@Alice I'm going to do quite a short story and will do more another time.
Once upon a time not too long ago there was a girl called Charlotte and a boy called jack. And they were both boyfriend and girlfriend.
One morning while jack was still in bed Charlotte came knocking at the door at 8:00 am. This was something that happened quite a lot and once she even came to his house at 3:00 I'm the morning. But anyway, she was wearing a little pink dress with white poker dots on it and a little pink ribbon tied up in her hair to match her outfit.
When jack opened the door he looked like he was sleep walking cause he was so tired. " what it is " he asked in a grumpy tone. " oh, nice to see you too." She said sarcastically. "Well, why ARE you here?" He repeated. " I've got you a present!" She squealed with excitement, and pulled out a bunch of roses from a bag she had been carrying. "You came all the way over here at 8:00 am JUST to give me some roses?" He was getting a bit annoyed. " yes I did and you should be grateful for having such a loving girlfriend. Now are you going to let me in yet or keep yapping on about how I shouldn't get you things?" She said.
Jack stepped aside to let her in. "Coffee?" He asked. " no thanks I had some squash before I left the house." Jack nodded and took the flowers and put it in a vase. " Charlotte, we need to talk." He said after a couple of seconds.
"Sure honey what about?"
"Wait, your not braking up with me are you?" She said on verge of tears.
"No, no." He said cuddling her. " it's just that... I'm not sure if I can cope with you coming round every morning at 8. I think... I think we should have a rest from each other for a bit."
Charlotte starts to cry really hard and starts hitting the table saying "why? Why me? Why did he have to do this? Why? WHY!?!"
" honey, don't be sad I'm not breaking up with you I'm just saying that we should see a bit less of each other."
She lifts her head up to him. " what's the difference? I mean.. I love you! I can't live without you. And your telling me that I need to see you less? Can't you understand how much I love you. And how much I need you? Well obviously I'm wrong about you. I was wrong the first day I met you. The first time we kissed...."
Charlotte just ran out of the house crying horrendously. "Oh great." Jack muttered to himself. " she'll be telling everybody that its my fault."
He quickly made a cup of tea and then went strait back to bed.
The next day when jack woke up he expected to hear the knock at the door.
But he didn't.
And then he remembered the big argument him and Charlotte had yesterday morning.
He thought it was for the best.
Or was it?
Did he make the biggest mistake of his life?
Or was it the best?
He didn't know whether to call her to see if she was ok or not. He decided he would just to check.
He picked up his phone and dialled her home number. beep beep, it said over and over again. Until it finally said 'the person you are calling is currently unavailable, please try again later.'
He noticed that she had changed the message. It used to be her voice and it said 'hello, unfortunately I am unavailable. I am probably having fun with my fab-tab-ulas boyfriend somewhere! Please leave a message or hang up. Toddle pip!'
When he first heard it, he thought how cheesy. But then when he heard it again now sweet her voice sounded when she said 'boyfriend'.
He then dialled her Mobile.
And it also went to answer machine.
'Hello, I am probably off doing something really fun WITHOUT a certain someone with they're name beginning with J! I am having sooo much fun WITHOUT him! Please leave a message unless your that certain someone'
'Wow' he thought 'she really hates me now. I hope she's ok though'
Suddenly he heard a knock at the door and he rushed to it really quickly because he thought it was Charlotte.
But it wasn't. It was her friend grace.
She was a mean moody person that always sticks up for Charlotte. And boy did he know that he was about to get kicked in the ass.
But to his surprise she starter flirting with him.
" I heard you and Charlotte broke up. I thought.. I thought you might needs some company." She said in a low husky voice failing to Impress him.
"Oh no, we didn't break up. It was a miss
understanding. I think." He quivered.
" you don't sound so sure babes"
" have you seen Charlotte? I've been trying to get to her." He tried changing the subject.
" will you shut up already about Charlotte I'm trying to be your new girlfriend and you keep talking about her! I may stickup for her but I envy her so much." She shouted
"Cos she had you as a boyfriend and I didn't have anyone. And she always came to my house and told me how great you were and how you make her feel so happy. But I don't have that! But I can now that she left you." She cried.
"Maybe you should go." He suggested.
"Maybe I will now but this isn't over! I will get you ! I will have my prince and happy ending!" She walked out of the house.
'Oh my gosh' jack thought 'two lady's leaving my house crying in two days. It's just crazy. The naibours are going to think I'm bulling women.'
An hour later jack got a call.
"Hello?" He said.
"I'm do sorry... I.. I.. I didn't mean it... I.. "
"Oh Charlotte, honey. Don't cry. Where have you been? I've been so worried."
"Can you come and get me?"
"Of course! Where are you?"
"I'm outside your house."
She hangs up.
Jack rushes Down to the door and finds Charlotte In the same pink dress she wore yesterday.
She ran right into him and hugged him for at least 10 minutes.
"I'm sorry" she said "I shouldn't of ran off and not answered your calls. It was horrid of me." She said shamefully.
" no, it's my fault for even saying we should have a break. Look, all I know is that I love you and I want to be with you. And it will stay like that. But please could you try to not come so early in the mornings?"
"I promise. Unless I have to or you ill or it's your birthday or something."
"I love you"
"I love you too"
The end. Ta da!
Sorry this one is long but when I was writing I couldn't stop. Ha ha. Hope you enjoy it and it was about breaking up and getting back together. Thanks again for enjoying my first one and asking for a second one. Xxxxx
" no thanks I had some juice this morning before I left."
Jack put the roses in a vase and then watched Charlotte be happy in her own little world.
"We need to talk." He said
"Sure honey about what?"
Her eyes started getting teary.
"Your not breaking up with me are you?" She whispered letting a tear leak down her face. " I thought we were fine. I thought we were in love. I thought we were the best boyfriend and girlfriend. To ever live on this planet!" She's crying very hard now.
Jack wraps his arms around her but she pushes away.
"Don't do this babe. I DO love you. You know that. "
"No, I don't know that you love me. I thought you did but now your spilling out..." She starts banging her fist on the table.
"We aren't breaking up though darling I just wanted to talk about us.." He tried to say
" yeah, we'll talk. We' ll about how right now your dumping me!"
She stomps off out of the house, still crying horrendously.
'Oh great' he thought 'I just wanted to say 'please stop coming round so early' '
Slowly jack went back to bed.
When he woke up the next morning, he waited for the knock on the door to come.
But it didn't.
And then he remembered the big argument that he and Charlotte had yesterday morning.
He started to panic wondering if he should have gone after her. Or was he right to just stay at home and not look or call for her?
He decided that he would call her just to make sure that she was alright.
It made the sound beep beep, quite a lot until it finally came to someone's voice. But it wasn't Charlottes voice, it was an answer machine. It said what you would usually hear on an answers machine but what made jack feel sad was the fact that she'd changed her old message which was ' hello! Sorry but I am not available as I am probably with me amazing boyfriend having a FAB-TAB-ULAS time! Please leave a message after the tone.'
He thought it was so sweet that message and he loved it whenever she said boyfriend.
He then decided to ring her mobile.
' hello I'm Charlotte and I'm sorry to say that I'm not around to pick up the phone and I am probably having the BEST time of my life WITHOUT a certain someone with they're name beginning with J. In fact it's the best fun I've ever had and much better than BEING with a certain someone beginning with J. Please leave a message after the tone.'
Now jack felt really sad and guilty.
He wish he hadn't said anything.
But suddenly her heard a know at the door.
He quickly rushed to the door In hope that it was Charlotte. But it wasn't.
It was grace.
One of her friends that sticks up for her the most.
It was grace.
She was one of Charlottes friends who stuck up for her all the time. And boy did jack know that he was gonna get kicked in the ass real hard.
But to his surprise she started flirting with him.
"Hi handsome! I heard about you and Charlotte. It's so sad. I thought I could give you some company. " she said stepping into his house.
"Oh urrm I'm fine actually. Thanks though." He replied.
" go one it won't hurt to stay for a little while."
"Alright" he said.
"Do you know where Charlotte is? I've called her but it keeps going to answer machine. I'm really worried."
"It's really hot in here" grace says and take off her cardigan leaving her in a tight almost see through top and short shorts.
And she just smiled at him.
"Has she called you? I just don't know what to do." He moaned.
"Would you just shut up about her. You and her have broken up. I'm flirting with you and your not taking notice. What is your problem? Can't you pretend you like me. That at least would be kind!
I've envied her for so long and now she's gone I can finally have what I want!"
"I'm sorry what is it you want?" He asked.
"You! When she introduced me to you I wanted to be with you. And she always comes home to be and says about how amazing you are and how lucky she is to have someone like you. While I'm stuck with no one! Yes I have no one!" She starts crying dramatically.
" look maybe its best you leave." He said.
"Fine I will leave. But this isn't over! I WILL have MY happy ending. And you will be in it!" She runs out of the house crying.
'Wow' he thought ' two women run out of my house crying in two days, that must be a record'
And then he bursts into tears wishing Charlotte would come back and make him feel in another world of happiness and never sadness.
Later that night he got a call.
"Hello?" He said
"I..... I'm...sorry...I .. Don't..." Charlotte was crying and couldn't speak properly.
" honey where have you been? I've been so worried. Are you alright? "
"Can you pick me up please?"
"Of course sugarplum. Where are you?"
"Outside your house" and then she hung up.
Jack rushed downstairs to open the door and standing there was a shaking make up smudged Charlotte.
She rushed in and gave him a big hug.
"I love you" she shaked
"I love you too" he whispered back.
@Alice I finished I hope you like it and sorry if it isn't good. I don't think it's as good as the first one I did but that's just cos its tiering and boring having to write something all over again. Anyway so yeah. Hope you like lol 😜